Final Changes

After getting the feedback I knew exactly what I needed to do. I found that the feedback helped me. I went about making the changes that I needed to. I undid quite a lot of the editing, for example there was a page curl. My feedback told me that this detracted from the professionalism, so I deleted it. I also changed the titling. Ive had quite a lot of trouble with colour and font of titling. Also some of the feedback I received said that my opening looked a little bit like a trailer, trying to amend this  I put the 'Dear Diary' on top of some of the image, this helped it to look less like a trailer. Also I added in some more titles. All this helped me to make my opening look a lot more professional.